Question by Sumaya R: help me please………………?
Please help me to draft this. I am only 17 and English is not my mother Language. I badly need to draft this.Please help me. I have to write this assignment for get a job. Please help me and add more if you want. It’s a story of a poor kid. Thanks in advanced for your kind help.Again, please help me to get a job. All mighty will help you.Honest and please………
{I saw a stranger boy which I don’t know. He was around 13, and he had lost his father at the age of 8. It occurred that A Bus with High-speed crashed with another bus, and window glass flew all over. The boy ran straight to the bus and started to collect the broken glass. I felt surprised. Who would pick up glass? I ran to him and tried to stop him, because I was afraid he would cut himself because…it’s glass. All he did was simply give me a strange look, ignored me and collected all the glass In a thin bag. Again, I tried to ask him:” Why are you collecting this glass?”
He replied to me saying:” He wants to sell the glass, so he can get money to feed himself and his baby sister. But, he did not know where to sell the glass. He needed to buy baby food for his sister. His stepfather was not kind, or nice, and he did not care about them.”
So , he has to take the charge of her baby sister. I asked him , how much you get everyday. He answered, not more then fifty taka. He wants to go to school. Many of his friend are school going. But right now, he even cant dream of it. He becomes friendly with me. He offered me a ice-cream, So, nice to him. Again, he started talking, he wants that his baby sister must go to school. And one day she will take charge of the family. At the same time , he was concerned about their family condition. I asked him, why not you go to free school? He agreed with me but again poverty comes first, how will earn money for the next day? And this is the only reason to took glasses from the busy high way or another risky job. He lost his close friend on a terrible road accident. One day both of them passing in a road, they used a long stick and at the end of the stick a magnet attached, they start walking in the morning and the magnet just grabbed the fallen metal from the road. Both of them p assing the road, one of magnet ditouched from the stick. Magnet is very expensive for them , so his friend want to take the risk and suddenly , a pick up push him from back side. He lost his best friend. I asked him what he wants?
He answered, not much, a sutible job for her mother and a gurentee that he can start his study again and a better future for her baby sister.
Can you believe this? This is the slam reality. Both the government and developing organization work on it but if you thing about the personal charity. Not that much optimistic. If we cut a bit luxury from our daily life of try to save a penny amount. I am preety sure one day, we will be able to vanish the poverty from of country. Lest do something, Today is the day.}
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Answer by sweetpea
I used to be an English major in college, and used to proof read my mom’s college essays for her, so I hope I can help. Here is how I would present your paper:
I was walking one day and saw a strange boy which I didn’t know. Suddenly I saw a bus that was going too fast crash into another bus, causing window glass to fly all over. The boy ran straight to the bus and started to collect the broken glass. I felt surprised. Who would pick up glass? I ran to him and tried to stop him, because I was afraid he would cut himself on the glass. All he did was simply give me a strange look, He ignored me and collected all the glass In a thin bag. Again, I tried to ask him:” Why are you collecting this glass?”
He replied to me saying:” I want to sell the glass so I can get money to feed myself and my baby sister. But, I do not know where to sell the glass”. He needed to buy baby food for his sister. He said that he was 13 and had lost his father when he was 8. His stepfather was not kind, or nice, and did not care about them, so he has to take care of his baby sister. I asked him ,”How much do you get everyday?” He answered, “Not more then fifty taka.” He also wants to go to school. Many of his friend are going to school, but right now he even can’t even dream of it. He makes friends with me, and he offered me an ice-cream, So, I’m nice to him. Again, he started talking, he says that his baby sister must go to school so that one day she will take charge of the family. At the same time, he was concerned about their family condition. I asked him, “Why don’t you go to a free school?” He agreed with me but again t he financial hardship comes first. He said, “How will I earn money for tomorrow?” “This is the only reason I took glass from the busy highway. or have had other risky jobs.” He lost his close friend on a terrible road accident one day. Both of them were walking in a road using a long stick with a magnet attached at the end of it to grab any loose or fallen metal from the road. They started walking that morning using their sticks, when one of magnets fell off of his stick. Magnets are very expensive for them, so his friend took the risk and stepped out in the road to pick it up. Suddenly, a pick up truck hit him in the back. He was killed, so he lost his best friend. I felt very bad for him and asked him if there is anything he would want.
He answered, “Not much, just a suitable job for my mother, a guarantee that I can start my studies again, and a way to provide a better future for my baby sister.”
Can you believe this? This is the slam reality. Both the government and developing organizations work on it, but if you think about the personal charity, it’s not very optimistic. If we cut a little bit of luxury from our daily lives, I am pretty sure that one day we will be able to vanish the poverty from our country. We are living on this earth together, so let’s do our part to help each other. Let’s do something, Today is the day.}
I really liked your story. It opened my eyes to how some people are suffering in the world. I hope that I helped you, and that you get the job. Good luck!
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