Question by Monica: What do you think of this story?
Nicole sighed heavily as she had to sit with her so-called friends. The only person she truly enjoyed in hanging out with was Grace McIntyre. They had been friends since the third grade. They were practically jointed. Her other “friends” such as Le Meijin, Wendy Qin, Jesse Cole, and Alex Richardson were only associated with her because they were Grace’s friends. They were the reason she was being held back from being successful. Anyone else would have noticed her if it hadn’t been for her friends. Especially Le and Wendy. The two sniveling girls who wouldn’t stop talking. They were nice and all, but she was tired of being stuck in their circle. She wanted to be someone. Someone who got noticed.
She blew out another sigh, white puffs of breath exiting out of her mouth. It was a good thing she was being noticed by Carter Atkins. The most popular guy in the freshman class. It was about time being that she had was associated with his other friends. Semi-popular people like Lettie Eliopoulos were the only hope for her. As soon as she found out that the annoying girl from English class was friends with people like Holly Drake, she immediately started talking to her. Soon Lettie didn’t seem like such a loser.
Her other friends such as Erica Nasso, Jennifer Douglas, and Kimmie Tankersly understood her. They knew how much she wanted to be popular. They wanted to be in the in crowd as well. But for some reason the popular girls such as Holly, Elisha Carpenter, and Reese McKinley kept shunning them. Erica had tried her hardest to get them invited to their parties, but they rejected the invites each time.
Nicole didn’t think any of that was fair. She had everything she needed to be popular. She had the looks, the attitude, and the posture. But why wasn’t she popular? People like Palma Voorhees, Danielle Klasky, and Savannah Ripley got to be popular and they were the most weakest people in the group. Palma may have been deceased, but she always knew that Palma wasn’t fit for the group. Especially Savannah in which Carter used to go out with. She was elated when she found out they had broken up. Now she was the one who had a chance with him. Savannah was gorgeous and all, but she had the social skills of an Autistic outcast. She was just too shy. Erica didn’t like her because she thought she was too perfect and fake. Nicole had to agree on that one. No one was that sweet and kind. Especially a girl who was popular.
And Danielle wasn’t even pretty. She was cute, but her zits made her look like a hot-mess. Nicole didn’t see why people like Danielle got to be popular. They were like people who just became rich. They call those people “new money”. And Danielle, Palma, and Savannah were “new popular”. But then she realized she shouldn’t be talking about Palma. She was dead. She immediately felt guilty and erased the thought from her head.
“Are you and Carter going out?” Le asked curiously, fixing her glasses.
“Yeah,” she said aloofly, staring into space.
“When is he picking you up?” asked Grace.
“In about a couple of minutes. He should be there any minute.”
As if on cue a car pulled up in front of the driveway. She could clearly make out Carter’s older brother Chris in the driver’s seat. There were also other people in the car. Her eyes grew wide when she saw that Holly was in the back seat. Holly was unbelievably gorgeous. In a sophisticated, classy way. She was very articulate and mature for her age. She was the epitome of beautiful. And sitting next to Holly was Andy Simms. She nearly doubled over when she got a glimpse of him. Finally she was going to hang out with her old friend. He hadn’t talked to her in forever. The party last night was a little bit crazy. She had ended up sitting in his lap and flirting with him. This was a huge jackpot for her.
“Good luck!” Le called out as Nicole walked away from them.
She purposely ignored them. She walked over to the white van and waited for Andy to slide the door open.
“Hey,” he greeted, smiling as he let her in the car.
“Hey, what’s up?” she smiled, settling between Carter and him.
“Good,” he nodded, but looking a little bit lost. “How was the movies with Carter?”
“It was great!” she enthused, winking at Carter. “I got the pants scared off of me.”
Carter put his hand on her hair. His touch was everything she had imagined. It felt good being in the presence of the hottest boy in the school.
“We’re hanging out at Andy’s.” he announced, stroking her silky hair. “Is that okay?”
Of course that was okay. She had never been over to his house. She had heard it was beautiful and huge. She always wanted to go over a rich person’s house. Even though she was well-off herself, she didn’t get to experience the luxury like Andy
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